Justin's Prove It Writing

Scary Maze

WALT: proof read my writing to check spelling,grammar, and punctuation using classroom resources...eg junior dictionaries and thesaurus.

 Once upon a time there was a person called Jay. One day Jay was walking down the street and found a maze. Jay went in the maze.

The maze looked haunted because it had lots of spider webs and looked spooky. He walked more into the maze and heard dogs. WOOF! WOOF! Soon Jay saw the dogs. The dogs had black horrible fur and super sharp teeth. Jay screamed and swiftly went whizzing through the air. The horrible dog chased Jay. As the dog was running it multiplied. There was now three dogs. Jay keeped on running until he found a volcano about to erupt. BOOM! BOOM! The volcano erupted. Lava was going everywhere. It was burning down the whole maze faster than normal lava. Jay sprinted through the maze.

Jay found the exit and zoomed out and rushed to his home. Jay was finally safe at home away from exploding Volcanoes and dangerous dogs. The End.