Tuesday, 13 October 2015

Jessica's Prove It Writing




In autumn It Is always cold.The leaves begin to fall from the trees and change colours.The leaves sometimes fall into pills around the tree that  they fell from.The colours of leaves change from green to brown and orange. Not all tree leaves change colour.The trees that there leaves don't change at all they are called evergreen trees and the trees that change colour are called deciduous tree . I like autumn so much and spiring so  much.

The leaves can be crusty and brown.The  leaves vains stay like it is and the leaves stay
the same shape. It Is the colour of the leaf that changes.The pattens on the
leaves  also stay as they are. A tall tree would have made a big pill on the ground
because the big trees have lots of branches . Sometimes a branch can fall off with the
leaves.That's in autumn.                                                   

3 Comments:

At 20 October 2015 at 20:48 , Anonymous Anonymous said...

Great writing Jessica l liked how u edited your story
Ashar

 
At 27 October 2015 at 22:30 , Anonymous Anonymous said...

Great story Jessica. Next time try to use some compound sentences not just and. By Krishna

 
At 3 November 2015 at 20:14 , Anonymous Anonymous said...

I liked that you followed your plan Jessica.By Grayson

 

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