Jessica's Prove It Writing
In autumn It Is always cold.The leaves begin to fall from the trees and change colours.The leaves sometimes fall into pills around the tree that they fell from.The colours of leaves change from green to brown and orange. Not all tree leaves change colour.The trees that there leaves don't change at all they are called evergreen trees and the trees that change colour are called deciduous tree . I like autumn so much and spiring so much.
The leaves can be crusty and brown.The leaves vains stay like it is and the leaves stay
the same shape. It Is the colour of the leaf that changes.The pattens on the
leaves also stay as they are. A tall tree would have made a big pill on the ground
because the big trees have lots of branches . Sometimes a branch can fall off with the
leaves.That's in autumn.




3 Comments:
Great writing Jessica l liked how u edited your story
Ashar
Great story Jessica. Next time try to use some compound sentences not just and. By Krishna
I liked that you followed your plan Jessica.By Grayson
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